What I mean is, the visual field, crammed though it is, breaks up the tone. There is an intelligence at work but it’s not the same as in a printed opinion piece. Maybe your approach, even in a printed piece, would have a certain equanimity, and maybe the combination of the visual and verbal elements you’re using invites the possibility of complex approaches and multiple perspectives. It’s very interesting!
Kelly McQuain 
What I mean is, the visual field, crammed though it is, breaks up the tone. There is an intelligence at work but it’s not the same as in a printed opinion piece. Maybe your approach, even in a printed piece, would have a certain equanimity, and maybe the combination of the visual and verbal elements you’re using invites the possibility of complex approaches and multiple perspectives. It’s very interesting!
Thanks–and please look me up if you come to Philly